Ehm, hvad syntes i indtil videre? xD {{forumTopicSubject}}

Hvad syntes i om min engelsk stil der handler om musik indtil videre? Man skulle skrive om hvad musik betyder for mig og for verden.


The power of music
Music has the power to call up emotions in us. You can have tear in your because the music is touching. If you are happy, perhaps you would like to hear fresh music. Also you can be sad if you hear a sad song because it reminds you of one you love and missing. If I hear James Blunt – You’re beautiful, I start thinking on my little brother who is in heaven. He really liked the song and the music video.
I listening to music every day, but just Michael Jackson because I think he has a very beautiful voice and I really like his song themes, they have a good text and action. Without music, my day is so empty and boring.

For the world, I think music means a lot. People who make music, for example Michael Jackson, he trying to send a message out to the world that we must take care of the nature and preserve it as it is. Maybe people thinking about it, and one beginning to take care of the wild life, and animals! He means the world is sick, like fever.


Skriv gerne hvis i har nogle forslag til hvad jeg mere kan fylde på.
OBS: jeg ved godt jeg har mange alvorlige grammatiske fejl. Men i må stadig gerne sige hvis der er noget i ikke lige syntes hænger grammatisk sammen. :o)

Håber i vil læse det.