the hills, engelsk stil - hjælp. {{forumTopicSubject}}

ja, det her er hvad jeg har skrevet indtil videre om the hills - programmet på MTV. HAR IK RETTET STAVEFEJL, EL. ANDRE RETTELSER!!
er fuldstændig blank nu, nogle der kan hjælpe til hvad jeg mere kan skrive? hvis der altså er nogle som ser programmet? el. er der nogle der vil sige om det lyder godt el. helt dumt? s:

The hills is a reality program on MTV, as created by Adam diVello. Every production takes 20-22 minutes. They speak English, and it all happens for real. There are 4 seasons, and in all of them we are following Lauren Conrad and all his friends in LA. They go on clubs and cafes every day, when they not are on work. Lauren work as an intern at Teen Vogue, and there work his friend Whitney Port too. There are a lot of drama in the hills, for example had Lauren a best friend who was Heidi Montag but after a reputation as Heidi’s boyfriend Spencer Pratt had started be Lauren mad, and now they are not best friends any more. And now Lauren and Heidi are fighting for Audrina Patridge, but she will be there both good friends. Audrina have an on-off boyfriend Justin Brescia and they are living together in Audrinas new apartment. Spencer and Heidi are living together in a very fine apartment and now when Heidi’s older sister Holly Montag is in town and living with Spencer and Heidi in their apartment so are there some troubles. Holly is Laurens good friend, and also has Spencer a younger sister Stephanie Pratt who is Lauren's best friend now – so Heidi fell a little bit lonely. Spencer and Heidi have talking a little bit together, and now they have pitched Holly out at the apartment because it gave to many troubles. Lauren’s ex-boyfriend Brody Jenner is now Laurens closed friend, and they have together to good friends Frankie Delgado and Doug Reinhardt as is also Laurens ex-boyfriend. Whitney staying a little bit out of everything, but she is of course out on the evening with the others. She taking her job very seriously and she is never been fired as Heidi.

.. håber i vil give nogle kommentare, og noget hjælp. (: