engelsk kig lige :) {{forumTopicSubject}}

mig og en veninde skulle skrive en sjov stil, så vil i finde rettelser til denne :
The dinos are coming

Dear personnel officer of the dino world.
I am writing this application because I think, it seems like a very interesting job. I like to challenge myself, and try new exiting things.
Now about me: My name is Benedict Von Beck, I am 12 years old, maybe you already now put me in the “NO” box. “Because I am too young to take responsibility for a big center like yours”. BUT I urge you to keep reading:
When I was 2 years old I won a lot of spelling competitions. In a age of 4 I invent the internet. Actually I was even so clever, that I learned my English teacher, Carsten Vestergaard to use a dishcloth instead of his hand, every time the blackboard has been full of words.
When all my friends finished 4. Grade I already finished the college.
I don’t have homework (I made it all so fast, in the class), but sometime HP asks me to correct all the other students Mat or chemistry because I am just as clever as him.
One day I saw a writing competition in a newspaper, where the first prize was a trip to the African dessert with some other archeologists. I think it sound very exciting, so I wrote a very good text, I was extremely happy about it, ant than I send it in.

That trip must be mine! I waited with my telephone all day and all nights, I nearby lost the hope But someday they called and tell me that the first prize was mine.

After 5 warm days in the heat I found some bone from tyrannosaurs rex. It was wery exiting. I think it was the best day in my life.
I hope for a jop like a supervisor or something like that, I think I would be god to take accountability for the whole park. But if you have a job to me where I can invent new cars or machines I will be happy too.
I hope I sound interesting in your ears. I can step in, already now if you want to.