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Ja, nu har jeg så skrevet min terminsprøvestil(vi skal ikke rigtig op i det som terminsprøve, men vi skal lave alle delene af den prøve som vi kan trække til sommer), så derfor er det vigtigt at min stil er HELT perfekt

Jeg har skrevet på den i noget tid og synes selv at det sprogligt er noget af det bedre jeg har skrevet (:

Ville blive rigtig glad hvis i lige ville skimme det igennem og sige hvad i synes og om der er noget der skal rettes...
Kritik modtages GERNE! (virker helt forkert gerne at ville have at folk finder noget dårligt xD)

Det er et brev omkring ens fritidsinteresse (:

Dear pen pal
How great! It sounds like a lot of fun! Personally, I am very passionate about horses. I have been horseback riding almost ever since I first sat on a horse. I think I was four years old or something like that when I had my first ride on a pony, or you cannot really call it a ride, it was more like just sitting on a horse that took some few steps, but it just caught me and then I could not let it go. Slowly it has evolved from sitting on a horse to school riding then my own pony and now a young horse that I am going to educate instead of the opposite and a little and very cheeky colt.

I use something between half an hour and an hour every day just for basic cares of my horses. When the weather is nice, I try hard to find the time for a ride, even though it is difficult sometimes. In winter, I almost only ride when I am getting lessons, but in summer, I ride like five times a week on my own and simply love to compete in dressage competitions once or twice a month. Right now, I do only compete in beginner classes because I am riding a youngster, but I really hope to promote again soon.

Horses do really mean a lot to me. First of all, it is a fun hobby, but I also think that somehow being near horses helps us to become better persons. Indirectly they force you to take a proper look at yourself when things are going wrong and work with your anger, fear and egoism. For my part, I am really shy about meeting and especially talking to strangers, but when I am around horses it somehow makes me more friendly and open. I do not know if it is then because I am feeling confident about the most obviously topic or just because it calms me down, but it works!

My previous pony helped me through the time, when I got diabetes. When the moments came when I did not knew what to say or even think, it was her I went to see. I felt like all my problems kept a distance and that it was enough just to be for a while before facing all the things about diabetes once again. It was a really tough time, but being around horses definitely made it a lot easier.