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Dear Lena

As you now, im right now in Australia, whit my best friend Christine. Today it's Saturday, so i has been here for 4 weeks. I was landing in Sydney airport, after a long flight. We took a cob, an drow to our hotel i the middle of Syney. It's a 4 star hotel, whit aircondition in all rooms, because it's 32 degrees outside. We have planed to stay her 1 weeks more. I love to be here, it's so amazing, i'am sure that i will take down her again on time.

I think that you would like to hear about the hotel? We are living on a 4 star hotel on 67 plan. But lukyli there are elevators. But i would like to have a room on 1 or 2 plan, because i have elevator horror, but now i'am getting just to it, and i like to have the fantastic prospect. We kan acctally see the operahause from our balkon.

The first day we were paking out our close. We had desidet not to viset a place, because we new that we will be were tired after the long trip downhere. The rest of the day we were just laying on the balkon and took some sun. But Christine took to much, she were so red on her back that she gutten sleep the next 2 days. At the evning we went to a restureng near the hotel. It were delicius food, but also expensive.

The next days we were driving around in bus. We visit the opera hause. We sleept a place beside the opera house, because there lots of km. up there. We were guiding around one of the day. I find out that the opera house being bild by a danish man in 2000. Also that So we spend 2 days in the opera house.
And one evening we were out and looked at Harbour Bridge. I never seen such a beautiful brigde before. There were so much light, in all colers, and detailes on it. We were just standing and looked at the brigde for about 3 hours.

We have also been on a kind of safari trip, were we saw some kangaroos. We were guiding around in a bus the hole day, and for dinner we eat kangaroo beef, it tasted like chicken. On the safari trip, we also saw bæltedyr. It were very fun and a amazing experince.

The most of the days are we laying on the beath the hole day. So we are both very brown right now. We have been on 3 forskellige beaths, and there are 100 of people every place. The wather are so clear and blue, and ther aint any stone or crabs. We were sailing out on a ø, but we cutten swim there because there were sharks over all, and 4 weeks before we came were ther at young girl who had swimmt and she got kild by a shark. So many people are stil rystede over the episode.

Before we are going home we also want to go on a dykkertyr in the blue oacen. Im very excided for the trip. Im never been dykkede før. I hope we will see all the beatiful fish as we don't have in Denmark.

But now i will going down in the resturan on the hotel and eat dinner. I hope that your doing well in Denmark.

From Louise