Fejl i tekster (engelsk) {{forumTopicSubject}}

OBS: det er IKKE lektier.
Men jeg har nogen engelske digte/sangtekster som jeg gerne vil have rettet, da jeg selv er en ret stor klovn til engelsk, så spørger jeg herinde.
Hvis der er noget der slet ikke hænger sammen, må i også gerne skrive det. Især you're og your kludre jeg med, for´jeg forstår ikke forskellen (;
OBS: søger kun seriøst svar!(:

1) Flying

Look at me,
tell me what you see.
Close your eyes,
will you still belive.

Set me free,
free so i can fly.
Let me go my way,
i will still be here.

Now i'm flying,
i look up in the sky.
And i feel so free,
i'm here where i belong.

Touch (eller feel, har ikke helt bestemt mig) my heart
Tell me what you feel.
Open up,
will you still be here.

Fly away,
i set you free too go.
Let you find your way,
your with me ind the heart.

Now were flying,
we look up in the sky.
and we feel so free.
we(med 're?) finally go back home.

2) untitled

I'm done,
i'm over.
I can't breathe,
anymore.

it's time
time to go.
but i can't
walk away.

'Cause i need to know,
i have so many questions.
how do i let you go,
my heart can't change direction

i stand
by your side.
i belong
somewhere else

this is wrong
i must leave
turn around
now i see.

I don't need to know,
i don't have any questions.
now i let you go,
my heart has changed direction.


OBS: jeg beder ikke om kritik til disse tekster. men selvfølgelig modtages ris/ros altid.