X-Høj gør mig en tjeneste;*<3<3 {{forumTopicSubject}}
hej piger, er virkelig på skideren. jeg har lavet et referat på engelsk om 8-mile (det er bedst hvis i har set filmen, men det er og¨å ok hvis i ikke har)
men er der ikke en der virkelig er sød at læse det igennem og måske rette de værdste fejl? jeg er ville til at give x-høj 5stjerne til viseoer osv hvis i vil gøre det for mig! 
ps går i 10 klasse, så det skal self være en der også mindst er på den nivaeu:D PLEASE!!
ps- kan godt forstå hvis i ikke magter det, så der er intet der:D<3<3
stien
A movie review of 8-Mile
Movie 8-mile
8-mile is a move which Eminem makes his acting debut in this hard drama, inspired in part by incidents from the musician's own life.
Jimmy Smith (Eminem), known to his friends as Rabbit, is a young man trying to make his way out of the inner-city Detroit. Rabbit's entire life has been hard, and it certainly hasn't gotten any easier lately; Rabbit has just been dumped by his girlfriend, forcing him to move back in with his mother, Stephanie, and he's getting along especially poorly with Stephanie's new boyfriend.
Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and doesn't pay especially well, and he's convinced his skills as a rapper are his only real hope at a better life. Rabbit makes music with a crew of DJ's and MC's who call themselves Three One Third, among them his close friend Future.
But it is not easy for him to make music because he’s status as the white kid is extremely intimidating.
What I think about the move
I love this movie because it tells about how tough conditions we offer other people to live.
The movie 8-mile is all its own, it's not often you see other films like this one. It strikes me every time I see the movie and I think it’s one of the most important in a film, that its the message can affect other people.
The movie is not straightforward. It has some rotation schemes, which I think make it more exciting. The music in the movie is really good because they make songs and sing them because it is a biography of the rapper Eminem's life we follow.
Actors
Eminem - Jimmy 'B-Rabbit' Smith (protagonist)
Kim Basinger - Stephanie Smith (mother of rabbit)
Mekhi Phifer - David 'Future' Porter (friend to rabbit)
Brittany Murphy – Alex (girlfriend of rabbit)
Evan Jones - Cheddar Bob (friend to rabbit)
Omar Benson Miller - Sol George (friend to rabbit)
den er blivet lidt lang men i behøver ikke at gå i dybten bare lige de mest i øjenfaldende fejl <3<3
feb 2007
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Der er 2 steder hvor der skulle stå Movie men hvor der står Move. Det er første sætning og så hvor der står What I think about the move
maj 2012
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What I think about the move
Skal rettes til movie, går jeg ud fra?
Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and doesn't pay especially well,
Du skriver at jobbet ikke betaler ham godt -men det er jo chefen, ikke jobbet, der betaler ham. Omformuler
among them his close friend Future.
Der mangler noget, for at få det til at hænge sammen med resten af sætningen..
among them is/were his close friend Future.
But it is not easy for him to make music because he’s status as the white kid is extremely intimidating.
He's = He is = han er. skal rettes
Det var det jeg lige faldt over. Går i 2.g med engelsk på A niveau, men har da også selv en del fejl..
nov 2010
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du sriver Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and doesn't pay especially well,
Du skriver at jobbet ikke betaler ham godt -men det er jo chefen, ikke jobbet, der betaler ham. Omformuler
men hvordan vil du omformuler det? :))
og MANGE tak for hjælpen alle ;D det betyder meget
maj 2012
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til:
Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and he doesn't get very well paid. He's convinced that his skills as a rapper are his only real hope for a better life.
Om det skal være ''get very well paid'' eller ''get paid very well'' er jeg lidt usikker på..
mar 2011
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Rabbit's entire life has been hard, and it certainly hasn't gotten any easier lately = Rabbit's entire life has been hard, and it's certainly hasn't got any better lately
nd he's getting along especially poorly with Stephanie's new boyfriend. = and he's not getting along with/he's having a bad relationship to his mom's boyfriend cheddar (sådan villa jeg strive det. Syntes ikke man kan skrive getting along especially poorly with ...)
rapper are his only real hope at a better life. = to a better life/ for a better life
The movie 8-mile is all its own, it's not often you see other films like this one. It strikes me every time I see the movie and I think it’s one of the most important in a film, that its the message can affect other people. = The movie 8-mile is not like other movies, it's not often you see other movies like this one. It hits me every time I see the movie and I think one of the most important things in a movie is the message ...forstår ikke lige hvad du meaner med get sidste...
også husk!!!! skriver du it's nogle steder, skal du skrive det hele vejen igennem kan se der er enkelte steder hvor du har skrevet it is ... også movie bliv ved movie istedet for at begynde at kalde den for film
Er du enig Katrine?
apr 2010
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Movie 8-mile
8-mile is a movie in which Eminem makes his acting debut. This hard drama is inspired partly by incidents from the musician's own life.
Jimmy Smith (Eminem), known to his friends as Rabbit, is a young man trying to make his way out of the inner-city Detroit. Rabbit's entire life has been hard, and it certainly hasn't gotten any easier lately; Rabbit has just been dumped by his girlfriend, forcing him to move back in with his mother, Stephanie, and he's getting along especially poorly with Stephanie's new boyfriend.
Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and doesn't pay especially well, and he's convinced that his skills as a rapper, is his only real hope at a better life. Rabbit makes music with a crew of DJ's and MC's who call themselves Three One Third, among them is his close friend Future.
But it is not easy for him to make music because his status as the white kid is extremely intimidating.
What I think about the move
I love this movie because it showes the tough conditions we allow other people to live in.
The movie 8-mile is one of a kind, it's not often you see other films like this one. It hits me every time I see the movie and I think it’s one of the most important aspects in a film, that the message can have an affect on other people.
The movie is not straightforward. It has some rotation schemes, which I think makes it more exciting. The music in the movie is really good because they make songs and sing them because it is a biography of the rapper Eminem's life we get to follow.
Actors
Eminem - Jimmy 'B-Rabbit' Smith (protagonist)
Kim Basinger - Stephanie Smith (mother of rabbit)
Mekhi Phifer - David 'Future' Porter (friend of rabbit)
Brittany Murphy – Alex (girlfriend of rabbit)
Evan Jones - Cheddar Bob (friend of rabbit)
Omar Benson Miller - Sol George (friend of rabbit)
nov 2010
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mar 2011
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nu har jeg så ikke læst de andres indlæg under mit, om vi er enige, men hvis vi ikke er, ville jeg være et stort spørgsmåls tegn
nov 2010
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men igen, værdsætter meget jeres hjælp!:)
mar 2011
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- glad for at kunne hjælpe.
mar 2007
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A movie review of 8-Mile
Movie 8-mile
8-mile is a movie which Eminem makes his acting debut in this hard drama, inspired in part by incidents from the musician's own life.
Jimmy Smith (Eminem), known to his friends as Rabbit, is a young man trying to make his way out of inner-city Detroit. Rabbit's entire life has been hard, and it certainly hasn't gotten any easier lately; Rabbit has just been dumped by his girlfriend, forcing him to move back in with his mother, Stephanie, and he's getting along especially poorly with Stephanie's new boyfriend.
Rabbit has a factory job that's tough, demeaning, and doesn't pay especially well, and he's convinced his skills as a rapper are his only real hope for a better life. Rabbit makes music with a crew of DJ's and MC's who call themselves Three One Third, among them his close friend Future.
But it is not easy for him to make music because his status as the white kid is extremely intimidating.
What I think about the movie
I love this movie because it tells about how tough conditions we offer other people to live.
Denne linie giver ikke helt mening på engelsk som den er skrevet.... så her laver vi lige en ny sætning, med det budskab du vil bringe...
I love this movie because it shows the difficult conditions some people are forced to live in.
***The movie 8-mile is all its own, it's not often you see other films like this one.
Første del af denne sætning giver ikke helt mening men hvis du kan skrive til mig på dansk hvad det er du vil have frem kan jeg godt kigge igen senere...
It hits me that every time I see this movie, that one of the most important things about the film, is how much the message can affect other people.
***The movie is not straightforward. It has some rotation schemes, which I think make it more exciting.
igen denne må du lige sende mig på dansk det budskab du vil sende...
The music in the movie is really good, I like that they write the songs in the movie and sing them, because we follow the rapper Eminem's life, in the start of his carreer.
Actors
Eminem - Jimmy 'B-Rabbit' Smith (protagonist)
Kim Basinger - Stephanie Smith (mother of rabbit)
Mekhi Phifer - David 'Future' Porter (friend to rabbit)
Brittany Murphy – Alex (girlfriend of rabbit)
Evan Jones - Cheddar Bob (friend to rabbit)
Omar Benson Miller - Sol George (friend to rabbit)
nov 2010
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også mange tak for hjælpen.
Men skal faktisk aflevere den i aften, det var bare lige de små fejl jeg ville havde rettet. men det her er helt fint!;) 1000tak for hjælpen, det er jeg rigtig glad for!:)
mar 2007
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nov 2010
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men jeg er virkelig taknemmelig for alle jer der ville hjælpe:) 1000 tak, det er jeg rigtig glad for!:)
feb 2012
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X-Høj gør mig en tjeneste;*<3<3