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Hej (:
jeg skulle skrive en lille engelsk opgave/stil om en vinder jeg beundre, jeg har valgt at skrive om min seje veninde som har vundet rigtig meget osv, men den er ikk helt lang nok, har i nogle ideer til hvordan den kan blive længere osv ,

indtil videre lyder den sådan . I må gerne rette grammatik osv da jeg er mega dårlig til engelsk (:


A winner I admire.


She is a winner because; she is a very good friend and a good horse rider. I met her at riding competitions. We were competitors then. Now she has become very good at riding. During the last year she was won three national championships, two Scandinavian championships, and a third place in the European championships. When we rode together, she was always better, than the rest of us. But none of us thought she would become that good already at fourteen.
We started at the same level, and rode in the same classes and competitions for almost six years. In the last three years she has become very competent very quickly. What makes her a true winner is that she still is my good friend even though she is so much better than me. We have known each other for so many years, and spent so many hours together.
That is why our friendship lasts, even though we are none at different levels.
She is a girl I admire because she has won so many big prices; she is not my idol, bur I look up to her. She is not my idol because I known her too well. When we are not together at competitions or ride together to practice every Tuesday, we spent time together at her or my house, and then we are not with the horses. We do many things, we go shopping on Støget in Copenhagen, or we go to parties.

She is sweet and good to me, cool, talented, fun to be with, competent and she is not a snob. That is why she is a true winner and a very good friend for me.